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Check Chronicles
  Check walks forward. His eyes glow grey. “Your reign of terror ends. TODAY!” He morphs into his Flojtandi forme. He says “You shall not end this world,  Rahgnaroch!” Rahgnaroch turns.  He grins, dark red eyes glowing. He spreads his claws. The weapons of Check's comrades glisten in the light. Attached to his claws. His black wings spread, the ice spikes on them shimmer, glowing with a faint blue light.  He laughs. “You cannot defeat me. I have absorbed all of them. Their power is mine!” His crescent moon horn glows yellow. His tail smashes on the ground.  
  Check begins walking forward. His scythe comes out. He slides forward. He swings his scythe.  Rahgnaroch swiftly turns,  blocking with the left weapons, then claws forward with the right. Check lets go of the scythe with his left hand,  grabbing Rahgnaroch’s arm, barely stopping his chest from being pierced. His eyes narrow, he shouts “Ba
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How Nion got her Shade Palm
How Nion got her Shade Palm.
Nion's eyes glow.  She wanders down the dark corridor.  "Temple of fear,  eh? Not scary" she folds her arms, looking around. She has a gauntlet on her left arm. "Tch... " she holds it. "Damn... my powers have been out of whack ever since I entered.  Luckily, my band keeps my powers from taking control..." she looks up. "..." her eyes narrow.  "You." A man with glasses is watching her. He wears a suit. "Hello Nion!  Quite a special place this is!" Nion spits. "Azra." The demon laughs. "You remember,  my friend!" Nion snarls. "We were never friends.  Your mind is delusional from when I locked you in the Netherwarp." Azra claps his hands.  "Not friends?  Then what were we?" He laughs.  "Oh yeeaaaahh! I killed your little sister!"
  Nion's eyes flash. "And you ate her soul. I remember quite well. " Azra giggles. "I've come for something! I forget~! starts with a v..." Nion facepalms.  Vengeance. &
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Mistakes beginning roleplayers should avoid
[BI]This is supposed to help you roleplay and have other people enjoy it as much as you do, not to offend anybody.
[B]10) Using one liners
In my opinion,  it is very annoying when you're roleplaying, and somebody only uses one line responses that aren't creative... these are sometimes okay,  but... if that is solely what you do, it kills roleplays... and you're responsible. No self-respecting roleplayer enjoys that.
[B]9) Character clones
What character clones are, they're characters that are basically the exact same as a character.  An example would be if there was a character named Gem. Say, Gem has a green sword that glows dark black. They have green hair and blue eyes. A character clone of this would be like this: Jem. Owns greenish sword. Glows dark colors. Has greenish hair and blue eyes. Which one is more creative? The second one?  Exactly. The first one is a character clone. Character cloning requires no skill, and can make people very mad. If you're going t
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Standardized tests.
Concerning the tests of standards
Thesis:     There are quite a few major issues concerning standardized testing, and that is why students shouldn't be forced to take them.
I.    Standardized tests are changing the way teachers teach, in a negative way.
Testing is only a tiny part of what teaching is about. Teaching is about learning how to survive in the real world. If you’re starving and looking for food, the LAST thing you will do is need the worthless information they put on these tests.
1. According to the researcher Gerald W Bracey, owner of a PHD, ¨qualities that these
tests cannot measure include Creativity, Critical Thinking, Resilience, Motivation...¨ the
list goes on and on. These tests are stopping us, your children, from expressing
ourselves freely.
2.  Teachers are pressured to teach the test, and it is putting unnecessary stress on the
poor teachers. A five year study done in 2007 at the University of Maryland shows that
the press
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KOTU Tournament match two
Yua gets into a fighting stance. Terra raises her hand, her scythe appears. Yua's pistols appear on her wrists and ankles. The two rivals glare at each other.  As one,  they run at each other.  Yua jumps to the side, firing her pistols. Terra flinches as the bullets hit her arms. She growls, opening her palm.  It glows blue. Yua stops running,  holding her head. Terra grins,  walking towards her. She raises her scythe, slashing down.  In the sidelines, Tarro cheers. "Way to go babe!" He shouts.  Then, Terra rears back. A clock is glowing on her. Yua sneers.  "You're dead. That hurt." She punches Terra into the air, jumping up. She punches and kicks her repeatedly,  then puts the gun to her head, shooting.  The clock vanishes, Terra crashes into the ground.  Blood is on her head.  The announcer says "well, it appears she's dead!" Tarro shouts "no!" The ground rumbles. The announcer turns back to the arena. "Oh?" An aura of
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.:Character Stereotypes To Avoid And Fix:.
~Character stereotypes and how to avoid em~
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• START: For the sake of simplicity in describing your character to someone else, you may want to use some stereotype wording to paint a quick idea. BUT be careful, and show that your character is more than just that. For example my character Cecelia Hazel is a dumb pretty popular cheerleader with powers. But she’s a kind person who doesn't really get mad. She has powers but she is never a good fighter. She tries martial arts but fails at it. From the assumption of the stereotype “cheerleader” you could assume Cecelia
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       After the possibly hour long practice round on stage– which was purposely prompted by Wendi’s ridiculous lie–, Dr. Fright and Diana figured they would have needed to break away from the hyper ghouls. The Doctor’s only wish was for them to be alone for a couple hours. Finally. A lot of creatures from the Wastelanders to the Voodoo Sorcerers never acknowledged their previous marriage and they usually found them strolling through the park together; acting like an independent couple. Some found it cute, some found it odd. The two could care less about the undead’s opinions. It never angered them!
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How Not to write a Mary Sue
How Not To Write A Mary Sue
So, what is a Mary Sue? It is used as a form of criticism in literature and refers to an idealised and somewhat "perfect" character that appears to have no flaws or if they do they are so limited that all the "perfect" characteristics overwhelm them making the character "flat." Mary sue often refers to a young female protagonist and male "Mary Sues" are often called "Larry Stu".
From my experience most Mary Sues are written in non-published works usually by young writers especially in fan-fiction. However there are a few Mary Sue writers who are actually published (sadly). It shows a deep lacking to create perfect characters unless it's done for satirical purposes.
So why should you avoid writing Mary Sues? Simple, perfect is boring!
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  Check walks forward. His eyes glow grey. “Your reign of terror ends. TODAY!” He morphs into his Flojtandi forme. He says “You shall not end this world,  Rahgnaroch!” Rahgnaroch turns.  He grins, dark red eyes glowing. He spreads his claws. The weapons of Check's comrades glisten in the light. Attached to his claws. His black wings spread, the ice spikes on them shimmer, glowing with a faint blue light.  He laughs. “You cannot defeat me. I have absorbed all of them. Their power is mine!” His crescent moon horn glows yellow. His tail smashes on the ground.  

  Check begins walking forward. His scythe comes out. He slides forward. He swings his scythe.  Rahgnaroch swiftly turns,  blocking with the left weapons, then claws forward with the right. Check lets go of the scythe with his left hand,  grabbing Rahgnaroch’s arm, barely stopping his chest from being pierced. His eyes narrow, he shouts “Baldr!” His fist glows with light, he punches Rahgnaroch,  then spins away. “Forseti!” The scythe becomes a sword, cutting through Rahgnaroch’s arm, tearing it off

 The God of the End laughs. Shadows spread from his core, he regenerates.  “Thanks to your friend Snow Tiger,  I can regenerate.” Check growls. “Damn…” his scythe glows,  he runs forward. “Thor!” His scythe becomes a hammer, he swings it, lightning arcing from it. Rahgnaroch raises his arm shield.  The hammer crashes against it, with a sound like a thunderclap, knocking Check back. Rahgnaroch turns, bashing him in the stomach with the side of the shield.  He grunts, folding inward.

  Rahgnaroch grins, slamming his weapons down. Check coughs.  “Loki! “ He vanishes,  appearing a short ways away, holding his stomach.  “agh…” he disappears again.  Rahgnaroch looks around. “You cannot hide!” he shouts. Check's voice says “Nott! Vali!” He appears behind Rahgnaroch,  his scythe is a poisoned knife. He swings it.  Rahgnaroch turns, eyes wild, roaring. “DESIST!!” He punches Check in the chest. A shock wave spreads out.  Check coughs, flying back, hitting the wall. His weapon drops from his grasp. He reverts to human form, and slumps down. Blood trails from his mouth.

  Rahgnaroch walks to him. He lifts him by the throat. Check coughs, struggling to breathe. Rahgnaroch slams him into the ground, tail raising, stabbing downwards. Check moves his head to the side, the tail spears the ground next to it. It raises, then stabs down. This time, Check catches it. He breathes heavily, trying to keep the acidic tip from touching him.

 Rahgnaroch sneers wickedly, pressing down. “Where is your bravado, hero?!” He cackles, as Check’s hands give way. His tail spears into Check’s head. Check twitches, then goes still. Rahgnaroch grins. He removes his tail, showing the hole in Check’s skull. He stands up. “Aww. That’s it? Pathetic.” He starts stabbing Check repeatedly with his weapon-claws, yelling “Get up! Fight some more, Godeater!” However, Check doesn’t move. Rahgnaroch stands up. He turns away. “Heh… that was way too easy…” He starts walking, exiting the cave. He raises his hands. Fire glows in them. “Now… this world ends.”

  He bellows “Now… I call upon the powers of Destruction!” His body starts glowing orange. “Enter Ragnarock! Demolish! Destroy! OBLITERATE!!” lines spreading through his skin. Fire spreads over him. His horns catch fire, and grow from his head, becoming huge. Wings of fire grow from his back, along with a cape of fire. His fists become wrapped in fire. A crown of flames encircles his head. He rears back, roaring. “I am now ALL POWERFUL!!”

 In the cave where Check lays dead, his spirit sits. He is watching the unfolding events. “I’ve failed…” He says. “All that. All that sacrifice. All that bloodshed. All for nothing.” He punches the ground. There is a shimmer behind him. “Is this what you truly believe?” A voice says. Check’s eyes open. They have tears in them. “Grandfather..?” His spirit turns. That of a man is standing there, leaned against the wall. He has a powerful golden aura.

  Check looks down. “Grandfather… No, Arnebeck. I’ve failed. Your sacrifice was in vain.” Arnebeck crouches down. “Check. You have not failed.” The young warrior looks up. “Wh-what? What do you mean? I’m dead. It’s impossible.” Arnebeck sighs. “Check. What do I always tell you.” Check shuffles his feet. Arnebeck raises an eyebrow. “Welllllll?” Check murmurs “Nothing is impossible… the word itself says I’m possible.” Arnebeck nods. “Yes. Now… I have a gift for you.”

  Check looks at him. “What? What do you mean?” Arnebeck’s eyes close. “Check. I’ve lived my life. It’s coming to an end.” Check’s eyes widen. “Grampa? What are you…” Arnebeck’s hand raises. Check goes silent. Arnebeck whispers “Check. Absorb my power.” The godeater gasps. “Grandpa. I can’t do that. I’d never do that.” Arnebeck walks towards him. “I am but one life. You need to do it. To save Midgard. It is the only realm still standing. If it is destroyed, Yggdrasil will fall. Existence will end.” Check cries out “Grandpa, I can’t! You’re my grandfather, and--” Arnebeck whispers “It’s what LizBeth would’ve wanted.” Check’s head goes down. Tears fall.

  He looks up. His grey eyes are suddenly full of determination. “Alright. I’ll do it…” His hand opens. The Godeater Fist appears. It trembles. Check raises it, placing it on his grandfather’s forehead. “I’m sorry, Grandpa.” Arnebeck’s eyes close. “Don’t apologize.” Check nods, tears in his eyes. “Goodbye…” The palm begins pulsing. Arnebeck’s teeth grit, as he dissolves into Ether, being drawn into the hand.  Check’s eyes open, his pupils tiny. He gasps, feeling power flow through him.

  Rahgnaroch is sitting in the middle of a city. He smiles, watching as the humans run in terror, lava following them. His eyes look up, narrowing. Fire glows around him. There is a beacon of light in the cave that he killed Check in. He spreads his wings, flying towards it. Light explodes outwards, blinding him. He covers his eyes, his arms steaming.

  The light clears. Rahgnaroch uncovers his eyes. Somebody is floating in the air. They have golden wings. Their left eye glows with a light blue. A symbol is in the eye. A symbol of a star. It splits, becoming multiple orbs. Gold. Light green. Dark green. Brown. White. Orange. Tan. Gray. Eight of the realms.  It raises something. A half silver half goldlongsword, with spinespointing towards the tip of the blade.  coming out of it, pointing forward. The person says “Ar-ne-beck” Gold light flashes around them. An aura forms. Silver lightning crackles. Sparks fly. He looks up. “Rahgnaroch. I am your final opponent. I am the hope of this world. This existence! My name is Check! And I am a Flojtandi!”

  His arms go to the side. His wings flare. There is a boom, he rushes at Rahgnaroch, swinging his fist. Rahgnaroch blocks, holding his fist in place, slowly twisting it.. “You fool! You cannot--” Check turns, whipping Rahgnaroch across the face with three feathery tails.  Check spreads his arms, golden flames forming around him. The faint image of a Phoenix glows behind him. Rahgnaroch spreads his own arms, black and purple flames come into existence around him. The faint image of a dragon appears behind him.

  Seeing the Phoenix, Rahgnaroch grins. “Oh. That old fool lent you his power did he? Well, that’s too bad. I still have the power of all your friends inside me. You cannot defeat me.” He charges Check, running in the air, swinging his right claw. The weapons on it glow, along with LizBeth’s shield. Check crosses the blade in front of him, it glows golden. The claws clang against the sword, creating an explosion, sending them both backwards with an explosion of smoke.

  Check explodes through the smoke, sword glowing. He slashes it, a slash of golden light flies through the air, cutting through Rahgnaroch’s left arm. He roars in pain, the weapons fall to the ground. There is a faint shimmer, they become the figures of (Insert names here) appear, blinking in confusion. Rahgnaroch glares at Check. “You’ll pay for that!!” Check’s face becomes angry. “There is no telling how many you’ve hurt.” He raises the blade again, leaping up, spinning, crashing down on Rahgnaroch, who manages to block. Check twists around him, getting on his back, blade below his throat. The flames seem to have no effect on him.

  Rahgnaroch shakes his head from side to side, trying to dislodge Check. Check pushes the blade into his throat slightly, eyes cold. “How many did you hurt, Svikari?! You’ve killed and killed and killed, without any thought! You don’t deserve life!” Rahgnaroch yells “Svikari is dead! I am Rahgnaroch! Svikari died in Niflheim! From your hands!” Check whispers “And he’s about to die again.” Rahgnaroch’s eyes widen, terror showing on his face. “You wouldn’t kill me, Check. We’re best friends.”

  Check’s eyes glow with a golden grey light. “My best friend died in Niflheim. From my own. Two. Hands.” He slashes the blade across Rahgnaroch’s throat. The demon coughs blood. He roars, it turns into a gurgle. “D-Damn yoouuu!!!” Fire explodes outwards.
Check Chronicles
The story itself is a WIP. I'm working backwards. I'll post here as I finish. 
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How Nion got her Shade Palm.

Nion's eyes glow.  She wanders down the dark corridor.  "Temple of fear,  eh? Not scary" she folds her arms, looking around. She has a gauntlet on her left arm. "Tch... " she holds it. "Damn... my powers have been out of whack ever since I entered.  Luckily, my band keeps my powers from taking control..." she looks up. "..." her eyes narrow.  "You." A man with glasses is watching her. He wears a suit. "Hello Nion!  Quite a special place this is!" Nion spits. "Azra." The demon laughs. "You remember,  my friend!" Nion snarls. "We were never friends.  Your mind is delusional from when I locked you in the Netherwarp." Azra claps his hands.  "Not friends?  Then what were we?" He laughs.  "Oh yeeaaaahh! I killed your little sister!"

  Nion's eyes flash. "And you ate her soul. I remember quite well. " Azra giggles. "I've come for something! I forget~! starts with a v..." Nion facepalms.  Vengeance.  Of course." Nion walks towards Azra.  She unsheathes Jerandes,  a wicked smile on her face. Azra giggles again. "Careful friend! This temple does weird stuff to your head!" Nion runs at him, swinging Jerandes in a low arc. Azra skitters back, hands in his pocket,  then flips forward, kicking her sword, deflecting it. He then aims a triple spin kick. Nion deflects one, the second disarms her, the third smashes into her cheek. She falls back. Nion's eyes flash. She growls, morphing into her Mega Daemon Three form. She bares her fangs, then roars.

  Azra laughs. "That's a scary face friend!  I remember that!  " His cheerful eyes turn angry. "You sealed me with it." His eyes turn black. Nion runs at him. His legs glow. She slashes with a claw, he kicks, then spins,  jabbing her. She coughs.  He grins, aiming a heavy kick. Sensing her opening, Nion roars, punching him in the stomach full force. There is a boom, blades of air fly off. Azra flies back, hitting a wall. He coughs. Nion screeches,  running at him.

  His eyes open.  "Nion. Do you know why this is the temple of fear? " Nion doesn't answer. She stabs Azra right in the heart. He coughs blood, then smiles. The room glows. Azra vanishes, being replaced with a little girl with red hair.  Nion's eyes widden, she steps back. "P-pepper..." the girl smiles. "Why did you just stab me Nion? " Nion steps back. "No. This is an illusion. You're dead." Pepper sniffles. "Big sister, don't you love me?" Pepper giggles. Suddenly,  the room changes.  They're in a house.  Nion looks around. "..." her eyes close. "This is my home." A voice says "of course, silly!" Nion's eyes open wide.  

  She turns.  Agis is standing there. "Nion, you were thrashing in your sleep. Did you have a bad dream?" Nion shivers. "No. No. You're dead!" Agis sighs. "I'm sorry, dear... you must've had a nightmare..." Nion's eyes widden. "No. These past years haven't been--" Agis shushes her. "Pepper is sleeping. Don't wake her up." Nion looks around. She touches the wall. "..." her eyes tear up. "Even the fabric... I can feel it.. w...was it really just a dream?" She looks in the other room.

  Clive is sprawled on the couch,  asleep. Russel is smoking a pipe, reading a newspaper. "..." her eyes tear up.  "It's just as I remember it..." Nion walks upstairs. She goes to open the door to her room. "Huh. It's locked. Wei--" her eyes narrow. Her teeth grit. "Our doors don't have locks." Suddenly,  pepper is behind her. "Nion. Why do you want to leave? You could stay here. Forever."

  Nion turns. Suddenly,  she is out of her old shirt,  now in her armor. "You can't trick me." Pepper walks to her. "Sister. I want you to walk me to the park." Nion's eyes widden. "No. Never. I'll never bring you there!" Suddenly,  the scene changes, they're in a park. Nion is running, holding Pepper's hand, laughing.  "Sister!" Pepper shouts. Nion's eyes try to move. They can't.  She tries to stop running. She can't.  

 Nion turns.  "Yes, pep-- PEPPER!" Somebody is holding pepper. He has a demonic face, and red eyes. Nion runs towards him. The man grins. "Foolish idiot. " he twists pepper's neck. Nion reaches forward. 'No... not again! No! NOO! RUN FAST YOU DUMBASS--' there is a snap. Nion screams. She feels herself go demon Then devil. Then chaos. Finally, ending with Mega Daemon III. The man grins.

 He bites pepper's neck. Ripping out her soul. Eating it. Nion screeches in rage. She punches forward,  fist smashing through the demon. He gasps. "Gh...GHHYYAAA!!" He glows purple, vanishing into the Netherwarp. Nion stands there, breathing heavily.  The scene then changes.  Now it's a blank white room. Pepper is in front of Nion.  "You're a terrible big sister." Nion drops to her knees,  crying heavily.  "Pepper, I'm so sorry! I'm so so sorry! It's all my fault! " Pepper's eyes close.  Nion wraps her in a hug. Pepper's eyes open. They're red. She grins with Azra's teeth, then bites into Nion's throat. Her eyes widden. The image shatters.

  Pepper is gone, being replaced with Azra. His teeth are embedded in her throat.  She coughs blood. Nion falls.  Azra smiles. "Killed by your throat being hurt. Just like her." Nion's eyes close. "Sh...shut up..." her voice quivers. Azra laughs. He walks to her. "You've cause me so much pain, Nion!  I think I'll give it back to you before I kill you!" He raises his foot. It glows, he stomps down on her left hand. The bones shatter  Nion's eyes go wide,  she grits her teeth. Azra smiles sadistically. "Yes. Scream for me. Just like your little sister!"

  Nion screams, it turns into a cry of anguish. "SHUT UUUUUP" Azra grins.  He starts smashing his foot down all along her left arm. "SCREAM! SCREAM! SCREAM!" His foot shatters her gauntlet. "SCRREAAAM!!" Nion howls. Her arm starts pulsing with the antidark gauntlet gone. Azra smiles. "Hehe..." he steps back. "What's thus? Hehe! I get to beat you up fighting back! Even more fun!!" Nion stands up. Her broken arm hangs limp. It pulses. Nion then screams, eyes opening,  arching her back.  

  An Aura surrounds her. A demonic aura. However,  it seems differnt. The aura is black. Pure black. The aura then shrinks. It concentrates in the broken arm. The aura vanishes. Nion lowers. Her teeth are grit. Azra motions for her to continue. Nion's eyes open.  They are full of tears. "I'll... exterminate you!" She grabs Jerandes,  flying at him. He raises a foot, aiming a spin kick. It hits. Nion doesn't react.  She slashes him, then stabs him through the chest, stabbing the blade into the ground. Azra coughs blood, laughing. "Killing me won't bring your sister back.  " Nion's teeth clench.  "I am full aware." She raises her blackened hand. It opens.  

  A symbol appears in the palm. The demon symbol for "extermination". She smashes the palm into his face.  She clenches it. He howls, then vanishes.  A ball of darkness goes into the hand. The arm returns to normal.  Nion staggers out of the temple. Her eyesight blurrs, she falls forward.  Before she falls asleep, she could swear she sees a shimmering image of somebody with red hair smiling...
How Nion got her Shade Palm
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Chapter 5 “Characters” – Section 2 “Protagonists”
“Plot is people. Human emotions and desires founded on the realities of life, working at cross purposes, getting hotter and fiercer as they strike against each other until finally there’s an explosion—that’s Plot.”
—Leigh Brackett
Apart from Primary and Secondary Protagonists, there are many other different protagonist characters-types that can drive a story—ranging from heroes, to villains, to antiheroes, to just normal people. Today, I'm going to discuss what universal attributes make a great protagonist that will drive your story forward, as well as how to define and craft this character in a way that gives them a
Writing Lesson: Naming Your Character    Your character's name is one of the most important decisions you have to make when writing a story. There are tons of resources for naming your characters (baby name websites being my personal favorite) but there are also many things you should take into consideration. Here are some do's and don'ts in no particular order. 
Similar names for twins  I read an article on names recently that expressly forbid the use of matching or similar twin names because it was "overdone". While yes, naming your twins Jayden and Kayden can be a bit tacky sounding, the truth is that people do it. A lot. I've personally met a pair of identical twins named Kirsten and Kristen. Do I think their parents are crazy? A little, but when you're choosing names for your twins, it's hard not to look for rhyming or alliteration. For writers, my only suggestion is to make them visually different enough that readers can tell them apart. Jace and Jackson are easy tw
.:Character Stereotypes To Avoid And Fix:.~Character stereotypes and how to avoid em~
• WHY: Why are stereotypes bad? They are predictable, boring, annoying, cliché, flat, one-dimensional, need I go on? There’s no advantage to a character stereotype. They water down amazing plots and hinder a mediocre story that could become a great one. I’m not saying at all to avoid predictability so much that your character is all over the place, but, avoid complete stereotyping.
• START: For the sake of simplicity in describing your character to someone else, you may want to use some stereotype wording to paint a quick idea. BUT be careful, and show that your character is more than just that. For example my character Cecelia Hazel is a dumb pretty popular cheerleader with powers. But she’s a kind person who doesn't really get mad. She has powers but she is never a good fighter. She tries martial arts but fails at it. From the assumption of the stereotype “cheerleader” you could assume Cecelia
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Ueichi Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant Student Interface Designer
Hiya,
Just wanted to say thank you for the fave and being my first watcher! I greatly appreciate it! It means a lot to me! :)
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Logandeathblade1 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Professional Writer
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Nobody gives watches anymore it seems
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Ueichi Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New Deviant Student Interface Designer
really? hmm, maybe people have to really like an artist to follow them, which is understandable. 
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PrennCooder Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Hey 
Thank you so much for faving one of my guides :D (Big Grin) I really appreciate it! I hope its helped you in some way. 
If you watch me you'll see that I have tons of other guides coming too! There are many already in my gallery, which I hope you'll check out. 
Here is the folder with them if you want to see them: prenncooder.deviantart.com/gal…
Thanks again :D (Big Grin)
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Logandeathblade1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Professional Writer
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ANYWAY,  whenever you have the time, please leave the feedback.  It's greatly appreciated.
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BKDragon50 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
yo, thanks for the favorite- if youwant i can draw one of your characters- cuz i am broke af in the ideas section of my brain.
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infaderps Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017
Hey thanks for the watch :)
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Logandeathblade1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2017  Professional Writer
No probs, Brooke.  I'm one of Devin's friends
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